Tuesday, 6 September 2016

Adding detail

I am learning to add some detail to my story.

Whales

The whale is big. It has plates under it’s mouth. It is the biggest whale in the world. It is the best whale. It is fun.


It is getting easier to write more detail in my story. I like writing more and more. Some days it is easy and on other days it is hard.

Root Words


It was hard to match the root words and their endings. I got some of them mixed up.